I wonder where I stand in crossroads of your life.
When we have had a strife.
--Picture Courtesy :Bhargav Mishra
When we have had a strife.
Often look back to see whether you followed my trail or not.
See around whether you are waiting on that bench uncaught...
Hoping you would be out of the woods, just like in my thoughts
I always saw that love blooming in your heart.
But, still wondered where I stand when we are apart!
The breeze conveyed of your presence.
The falling leaves caressed and touched my essence.
The periwinkle filled my vent.
With your nostalgic scent.
But I often wondered do you miss me the way I do?
If your words are so true,
Will you take me out of this blue?
Walking down the lonely roads!
Where do I stand ?
When you leave me unplanned
I say to me
I shall stand;With thee
Cause Its only with thee I am me .
--Picture Courtesy :Bhargav Mishra
17 comments:
Very good...Keep it up.
Good one...
These lines are so meaningful.
"I shall stand... With thee
Cause Its only with thee I am me ."
Beautiful words of love!!
The thought of waiting for someone and questioning love is nicely worded. The poem is beautiful but I loved the last paragraph where few words say a lot.
Saru
@ Mani ..thanx..dear!
@ leo Paw...:)
@ Vyankatesh...these questions..hav always...distrbed me...Wen u luv sum1 ...where do u stand ? wud they ...go dat extra mile 4 you..If they dont then where is luv..!?
Thanx..Saru ...for all the appreciation..:)
Lovely......beautiful!
Thanx for following! =)
NICE POEM, walking down the memory lane as it were, please remove the word verification for leaving comments
this was really lovely...heartfelt.
:) @ Rosette Princess
@ Deguide...Thanx dear
@ Ashwini...THANX fOR LIKING IT !
@ pYRthoRoshan ..:) Thanx,,
well written
Thank u ...:)
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